Intro Peer Review

The most helpful part of today was having a second pair of eyes look at it from an outsiders pov. Sometimes I struggle because I know what I am trying to say but no on else does. I was told to expand the anecdote about how I picked my major and give some more context on why we should care about major choice. It is helpful to have advice on where I should take my intro because that helps me know where I should take the whole paper in general. I also want to add a little bit more of “causes” and “effects” of major choice in my intro as well.

Bib Peer Review

I forgot to do the citation which was pointed out ever so nicely by Fred. I’m a little confused though because two people said my summary was very detailed and good and the other two said I needed to add more. I do think I need to provide a little bit more information about the source itself. I think I listed how the source will help in my paper well.