For the first paper I would give it a B plus. It was difficult to read in some areas. However he did accomplish his goal of telling the reader why activists are good’ and why we need them. He was able to convey his message to the reader and I was able to gain a point on activities from his reading. Overall I think it’s the better of the two. Also maybe some sources would help with paper.
The second paper I would give a B minus. It was also hard to read in some places; it bounced around in some places. However its point was made that we don’t need activists. It showed how much pain innocent people can go through. It also needs to show sources, but overall not a bad paper. The first paper I think was the better of the two.