In the essay written about S.P.I.T. there are many simple mistakes. Like missing capitalization, and to me it is just a bit of a mouth full. This essay from the start is almost boring because of the amount of information it supplies the reader with. But to counter that the information is also useful to the reader to truly understand the point which is trying to be made. The first essay was organized by subtitles that listed what we were about to read. This essay used the two articles that we have read previously in the weeks. In the nest essay as I read the conclusion I was kind of left on a cliffhanger. I would had liked at least another sentence or two. But the paper is organized with some subtitles but also transition sentences. This paper also had picture evidence which allowed us readers to in a way take a break between reading the paragraphs which was nice. This essay used the same two articles plus two more. And pictures, but what was nice was they attached a letter from the writing center showing that he had really tried and spent time on this paper.
