After participating in this class today I learned a lot that I could use in my project to improve it in many ways. After reading the sample drafts from other classes I was able to see that an area of improvement on my project would be enhancing how this specific experience changed myself as a whole. As well as another point in which I can see how I changed my actions following the event. further on after discussing the peer reviews I can see better where I can input better details to show where this specific experience took place and how exactly it changed me.
