I appreciate and agree with my instructor’s comments. I did not put as much time into this paper as I could have, resulting in poor transitioning and overall connectivity. It really showed me the impact that time has on a paper. Although I’d properly color coded and identified all my sources, the lack of time made it difficult to effectively link them to my topic sentences. On the next paper, I will be sure to allot more time to connecting sources and to properly citing. My instructor’s criticism is always very constructive, which is an immensely refreshing.