I fully agree with my peer’s feedback. I will now make sure to include hyperlinks, pictures, and an about me section. Additionally, I will clarify my main purpose to ensure clarity.
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Daily Write #14
Thanks to my peer, I have more confidence in my writing. I will double check and revise my work to improve clarity, and make sure everything is properly cited, as I otherwise see no obvious errors.
Daily Write #6
I agree with my peer’s statement that my introduction could be strengthened, and that my essay could use a rebuttal to refute the author’s claim. However, I do not agree that I properly used signal phrases. I will address my peer’s concerns by strengthening my introduction to captivate the reader’s attention, and will try to properly cite my quotations.