Based on my peer’s comments, I will make sure to incorporate more rhetorical devices, work on restructuring the essay for even smoother transitioning, and add appeal or purpose, so that the reader will become more interested and continue reading.
Based on my peer’s comments, I will make sure to incorporate more rhetorical devices, work on restructuring the essay for even smoother transitioning, and add appeal or purpose, so that the reader will become more interested and continue reading.