I think the information from the draft that was the most important was information portraying to why I chose the organization and how I connected to it. Then, in addition, the background information talking about the organization and its start-up. The only thing I really removed was fluff or extra wording used to make my sentences sound better. I made these decisions because I thought it was doing too much and making my points confusing due to the extra wording. My steps were to figure out what organization I wanted to do first then after that. My first goal was to make a personal connection to said organization. After that, I looked on the internet for information pertaining to this organization, and once I did, I distinguished what was of value to my paper from what wasn’t. I was curious about what started this organization because of how much someone saw others struggling, so they felt a desire to help, or was it because of a personal experience. It could have even been both, but after researching, I found out it was because of what happened to a young adult who did not get help. I just took what I viewed as vital and valuable points that others could relate to and decided to incorporate them into my paper. I am still trying to figure out what role I could play in this valuable organization and what they could provide me with!