During Peer review the best advice I received was to add structure to my essay. While reading over the reviews of my essay I had already thought about the things I need to work on. So that particular advice was something that I noticed myself a head of reading that specific review. Another piece of advice that I know will help my essay is to add more evidence to claim/ topic. One specific review said that they understood my thesis but, as they continued to read they didn’t see much evidence to help my thesis.
I think the best advice that I gave was to make the thesis clearer. Some time while reading an essay it can be easy to see the authors point of view and know what they are talking about with out a thesis. I think with a thesis it makes the body paragraphs easier to understand. The become easier to understand why they are in a specific order and it helps with a better structure of the paper