The first paper I read about the S.P.I.T. organization was a good detailed paper. The strongest aspects of that paper was the organization of the paper. Another strong aspect of the paper was the quotes from Dirk that was used to backup his claim. I also saw spaced out paragraphs which was good and good detail in the Interview. A weak aspect I read was in the third paragraph during the interview where the writer says that it will be in Houston. I found this part weak because the writer needs to write the city and the state. In the second paper I saw a lot more weak aspects than strong. The first weak aspect I saw was the structure of the paper, the details did not flow well with the paper. I saw some good quotes but the quotes did not backup the organization when they were used in the paper. A strong aspect I saw was the conclusion in the second paper it was great and it backed up the thesis.
