The most information I decided to include was the history of the student organization because readers like to know the purpose behind things and they also enjoy knowing what interests that person enough to write about it. People like to know your “why”. Why does that organization interest you? Why do you want to join?
I didn’t decide to leave out any specific information. I included everything I was told in my draft.
find a student that was involved with the organization and proceed with the questions provided by my instructor, then looked up the organization and included the history of it.
I did not bring up any assumptions in my research or in my first interview whereas, I will make this correction by furthering my research and involving this in the next major project.
I used the information I was given about this organization to conduct my analysis and my thesis statement of me wanting to join the organization.
i plan on continuing my research by looking up more information about the history of the UM organization and including assumptions in my next project/interview.
