In the first reflection I wrote on my first draft I said that my Dior New York Times analysis was full of information and that possibly I had put too much information in my analysis. So I went back and looked at all the quotes I had added and trimmed it down slightly but really felt like the information was essential to proving my point so I kept most of it. I have a bad habit of being “finished” with a paper when I’m tired of looking at it and messing with it so this time I really tried to revise and polish the paper the best that I could. I am really pleased with the way my paper turned out and feel that it flows all the way through and proves my points in a very easy to understand way.