At peer review today I got lots of great feedback and feel like I really have a clear direction to head in when I revise my paper to be turned in. My topic sentences are working well with my body paragraphs, my thesis is clear and introduction strong, and the overall message and content is scholarly and working toward a common theme. However, my essay is organized by source more than point which needs to be improved and I also need to use other sources in my paragraphs because I am usually only using one per paragraph and two per claim. I am feeling good about my progress and the revisions to come!