1. I give the first student an A letter grade. They do well in getting their points across with the topic they chose. They mention how others might feel about Anonymous, but they do not go into much detail about it. They add a good comparison to her argument, but it was a little lengthy. However, they did not use a simple generic voice.
2. I give the second student an A letter grade. They have a great hook and build up to their thesis. They clearly state a counterargument about their topic of activists. They did not stray from their topic, and brought up good points throughout the paper. They also had a great conclusion that summed up everything nicely.