I am having a little more trouble figuring out how I want to write my major paper 2. I chosen the prompt about information literacy. I decided to switch from the ethical dilemma prompt because I was having even more trouble with that one. I think I am going to mainly write about lying and misinformation from the United States about the safety of the drinking water system and the media from covering up and misleading people for so long. This is the basis of my paper so far, and I am working on building it up from here.
September 2020
What The Eyes Don’t See
Dr. Mona helped Flint understand what was truly happening in their community. She made the local as well as national media pay attention to Flint and what its people were experiencing. In my high school, there was a group of boys that had a group chat that was terribly racist and rude. Several of the girls in my friend group had crushes on some of the guys in the chat and after explaining to them that the things they were saying about classmates was wrong and unethical, they stopped putting boys like that on a pedestal in their minds. Everyone should want to make the world better and safer, but there are still many things you can do to by yourself to make an impact. One of the biggest things would be staying informed and unbiased and using your voice to share that with others. By eliminating the grey area of information that leads to wildly different stories, people can stay informed and knowledgeable about what is happening.
Reading Journal Murray
Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page | Murray, Donald. The Maker’s Eye. nabuckler.files.wordpress.com/2011/08/the-makers-eye.pdf.
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Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words | Donald Murray writes about the writing process in The Maker’s Eye. There were so many points that I had never thought about in a writing process. His opening statement about the difference between amateur and professional writers is both enlightening and frustrating as that amateur writer. I agree with Murray’s claim that drafting is hard, especially when you must give up sentences and ideas during revisions. I had never heard of the seven key elements of effective writing, which are subject, audience, form/genre, structure, development, dimensions, and tone. They give a new light to my writing process that I am excited to start using. |
Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author.
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I liked the concept that a piece of writing is never finished. I had never thought of it that way before but after thinking about how writing inspires us, I see how that is a true idea. |
How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?
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This article connects to another article I have read at the start of every English semester for probably the last 2 years, and that is Anne Lamott’s Shitty First Drafts. They both dive into the concepts that your first attempt at writing something is going to suck and that’s okay. |
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion. | How can we as writer’s stop being our own worst enemies? |
What is literacy to me?
Literacy is being able to understand one’s own thoughts and idea well enough to be able to put them into a physical form, whether it be from talking or writing. It also means that you are able to read and understand someone else’s. Literacy for me was what was expected. I had to learn to read and write in school, as all students under the curriculum do. This expectation was not where I began, however. My mother, who is one of my Sponsors of Literacy helped me find strength and love in the literary world. I can remember always wanting new books to read when I was younger. I didn’t quite understand that there wasn’t a ton of leftover money to spend on trivial things like getting books from the book fair. Little did I know that my mom was saving as much as she could and going to thrift stores and secondhand shops to find books for me. She found a box of worn out Babysitter’s Club books for a decent price and got them right before my 7th birthday. I can remember spending all summer reading the books and trying, and failing, to write my own. The love my mom showed me in our darkest years helped me find a passion for learning, reading, and writing that has followed me ever since.
Reading Journal Fishman
Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page.
Andrea R. Fishman. “Literacy and Cultural Context: A Lesson from the Amish.” Vol. 64, 1987, pgs. 842-854. |
Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words
Andrea Fishman wrote an article that makes the reader, or audience member, feel like they are experiencing the events told like they were there. This kind of writing really helps me understand concepts in a way that just reading facts can’t do. I have never researched or been exposed to the Amish lifestyle below the surface. Reading this journal piece, I felt like I was there on those nights of reading, singing, etc. I now understand the concepts of different versions and definitions of literacy. Each upbringing or culture can have its own, with small distinguishing marks or quirks. It takes a mature person to respect those differences and build upon them when they need to. |
Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author.
I had heard the term discourse before, but the way it Gee defined it– “a socially accepted association among ways of using language, of thinking, and of acting that can be used to identify oneself as a member of a socially meaningful group or ‘social network’”– really stood out to me. |
How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?
After reading and reflecting, I can see similarities between “discourses”- like traditional older grandparents or family members and the Amish community. Tiny details such as the books in the house or the lack of technology or even the way of learning showed me that there are |
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion.
How and why do different discourses overlap? |
Reading Journal Gee
Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page.
Gee, James. “What Is Literacy?”. Journal of Education. Volume 171. Issue 1. 1989, 18-23. |
Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words
I have always had trouble taking as much away from more classically written articles or journals than more modernly written pieces. This interpretation of literacy took me several times to read before I had a decent understanding of the point that Gee was trying to get across. The section where he broke down the difference between acquisition and learning was the most significant to me because of how it connects to everything else we have gone over so far. His separation of the parts of literacy also helped me have a stronger understanding of what literacy truly means. It is so much more than just an old name for English class. |
Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author.
I had heard the term discourse before, but the way it Gee defined it– “a socially accepted association among ways of using language, of thinking, and of acting that can be used to identify oneself as a member of a socially meaningful group or ‘social network’”– really stood out to me. |
How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?
Gee’s description of the different discourses jumped out at me because it reminded me of Peter Elbow’s article about the mother tongue in the deeply rooted idea that all people learn language and behavior in one way, but the “popular” or more respected discourse may be something else entirely. |
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion.
What discourses do young people find themselves isolated from or striving to be? Why is there a disconnect from what we are taught and what we must present? |
24 Hour Writing Log
5:37 am: text message to my manager- 9 words and 1 emoji
5:52 am: text message to my best friend- 22 words and 7 emojis
6:45 am: Snapchatted my other best friend– 0 words and 50+ emojis (I really lost count)
7:00 am-3:00pm: (So I am not on my phone at all at work, but I took around 400 orders during my shift and some of my favorite comments I had to type were “no chicken on the chicken sandwich? I don’t really know?” and “Tyler said he wants Dallis to make his milkshake because she makes the best milkshakes”)
4:02 pm: text message to my mom- 11 words and 0 emojis
6:30 pm-8:00 pm: worked on an assignment for school- 499 words and 0 emojis
8:44 pm: tik tok message to my best friend- 8 words and 4 emojis
8:46 pm: tik tok message to my best friend- 1 word and 1 emoji
8:47 pm: searching on the Netflix queue- 4 words and 0 emojis
11:12 pm: text message to my brother- 3 words and 0 emojis
Reading Journal Brandt
Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page.
Brandt, Deborah. “Sponsors of Literacy” College Composition and Communication Vol. 49, No. 2 (May, 1998), pp. 165-172. Published By: National Council of Teachers of English |
Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words
The concept that every generation has learned how to read, write, and learn differently is almost too big for me to wrap my head around. In the mid 1900’s, how did my grandmother discover and develop her love of writing? Sponsorship, which was also a new concept to me, is also incredible. The love and drive for reading and writing stems from something different for everyone. Did my grandmother love to read the song books in the piano bench before she learned to play, or maybe she fell in love at the same time she fell in love with my grandfather and his letters from overseas? Sponsorship can be anything- a letter, a song, a person, anything! It just shows how individualistic people are and how unique society really is. |
Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author.
Rumination, which was a completely unfamiliar word for me, means “obsessive thinking about an idea, situation, or choice especially when it interferes with normal mental functioning” according to Merriam Webster. Sponsorship was also a new concept to me. It means figures or objects that pave ways for literary learning, written by Brandt. |
How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?
This article as well as Elbow’s article revolve around the process of learning how to read, speak, and write. All three of these go hand in hand in the literary world. The concepts created in these works poke the brain to look at all learners individually and as on their own path. |
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion.
Is it the secondary education system’s fault for not allowing students to go down their own path to discover their sponsor for their literary journey? Or could it possibly be the student’s fault for not pursuing it on their own? |
Peer Group Resume
Hi there, my name is Rebecca Davis! This is my 3rd college English class, but the first at the University of Mississippi. One of my writing strengths is being able to create a thorough outline, as elementary as it sounds. The outline is the basis of a well written paper. One of my weaknesses that I want to improve on is feeling more confident as a writer. I will rewrite a sentence a million times and more times than not, the final product is the same as the first draft. I want to get real feedback from these peer groups. In high school, other students didn’t want to hurt each other’s feelings, but I really want that constructive criticism to improve my writing skills and confidence. My Hogwarts house is Slytherin, but I promise to not be brutal with feedback! My preferred email is rgdavis1@go.olemiss.edu, and I try to check my email first thing in the morning and late at night! I want to choose the first option of the “A-Grade” as I enjoy writing and reflecting.