In The Makers Eye, Murray discusses how difficult writing and self-reviewing can be. He states that self reviwing can be very hard, because people can be too hard on themselves and change thins that don’t nee to be changed. He also says that students will write one draft and submit it stating that it is already perfect, which in fact is never true. AS students we can never write a perfect or even good paper on the first try, it will take trial and error to make a paper actually good. When reading over your first draft you need to check for the subject, audience, form, structure, development, dimension, and tone. Then only is it ready to be finalized.