These two were excellent papers to read. They were two different papers, but with one common theme: being part of their respective communities. What was strong in the, You Better Think Before You Spit, the writer breaks up his paper into different points and categories, unlike the Puerto Rican Student Association. The first paper had bold points that gave us, the reader, an idea of a specific section of the paper he was writing about. The second one only had paragraph breaks, which is good but can be very long and tedious when the reader has to read several pages, losing their interest. However, a strong aspect of the Puerto Rican Student Association is the pictures he gave us in his paper, giving the reader visual aids on what he was writing about. But overall, both were excellent papers, both structure the way they thought would work for them, and both were successful. Both were excellent papers, using various sources, including Ann Johns and Kerry Dirk, two authors that we have read and done our reading journal on in this class.
