Final Reflective

I have learned a lot over this semester. I am sure that this course has help me become a better writer. I consider myself as not a good writer plus I don’t like writing. This course has been challenging and interesting. I have learned that I need to make more time and commitment to my papers to also help myself become a better writer. My experience has been different from high school writing from Writing 101 and frim Writing 102, learning in this writing class and learning in my other classes have a little connection but are also different, and the Writing 102 theme power and privilege is relatable to me and the world around me.

My high school writing and Writing 101 from last semester was different from this semester Writing 102. Last semester in Writing 101, I didn’t have a theme but this semester I did and it was power and privilege. While in high school, the writing was completely different from college writing. In high school, I didn’t write as much and most of the thing I’ve been writing in college I haven’t done before that I can remember. As the years of writing went by, it made me a better writer with every assignment. In this class, Writing 102, most of my writing was consistent because I kept making similar grades and I kept lacking in the same things. In my Synthesis and Researched Argument paper, I needed a stronger thesis as said from the feedback. When I revised the Researched paper, I made a better grade and gained extra points which is why I feel like each assignment helped me become a better writer and better in my weaknesses. In high school, writing was so easy which is probably why I struggle in it now. We barely wrote papers and coming into college writing, I felt unnprepared and I knew that I would struggle. For a daily write, I wrote about my strengths and weaknesses when writing a paper. (04/11/17) I think that these things are still the same but I have gotten better and I hope to continue to where I have no problems at all when writing a paper. When I do write a paper, peer review sometimes help when people are looking for mistakes and reading my paper trying to help. As I wrote for a daily write, I explained how it broadens my thoughts and lets me see the things I need to change. (02/09/17) Things were a lot different from high school writing and Writing 101 from Writing 102 but in a good way.

Learning in this writing class and learning in my other classes have a little connection. This writing class and my other classes are different because we don’t discuss the things going on with race in the world or gender roles, we just focus on what we are supposed to learn for that class only. For one class, we did see gender roles. The class was Theatre. We saw how it is somewhat the same from back then and now. We also talked about it in class and discussed how the gender roles affect lives. For one of the other writings we did for class that was in my CPB was about two sources and how women are depicted and how men see women. (Connections of the two sources) This was talked about in my writing class and shown and talked about in my theatre class. The other classes are chemistry, math, and psychology which we just focus on topics that are related to the subjects we are discussing or learning about in class. Learning in my writing class and learning in my other classes are different but benefits me in different ways.

The Writing 102 theme power and privilege is very relatable to me and the world around me. I am a black female so it is relatable me especially with some of the things we talked about in class like racism, gender roles, and discrimination. It also relates to me because I am a black female student at The University of Mississippi and here at Ole Miss there has been times where I was judged because of the color of my skin. The theme relates to the world around me because of all the things going on with the black race and the killing. Many African Americans are getting killed for looking like they’re up to no good or another person of another race feels threatened. For example, Trayvon Martin, who was an unarmed 18-year-old with a black hoodie, an Arizona, and Skittles walking home from the store. Another person of another race felt “threatened” by Trayvon. I can relate to this because I wonder if it would ever happen to my brother or any family member who could be walking home from school or from the store or anything. In my CPB for a CRQ, there was a quote that stood out to me about race and I talked about how it relates to me and the world around me and I also included Trayvon Martin and the racism still going on today. (CRQ 04/10) Also, many policemen are killing the black race because they also feel “threatened” so basically, they kill them first before someone of the black race could kill them first. For another example, Philando Castile, who was shot by a police officer when he told the officer that he has a license to carry and as he was reaching for it, he is shot. I wonder if it will ever happen to me or my family if any of us gets pulled over by a policeman. Another reason this theme was relatable to me is because I am a black female I may not get all the opportunities a white female or white male may get. In my CPB for a CRQ, there was a quote for the reading that was about a white male feeling more privileged to get a better job than McDonald’s. (CRQ 03/22) This is relatable because for example, if a white female and I are up for the same job and let’s just say I am more qualified for the job, I may not get it because of the color of my skin. This theme was very relatable to me and the world around me.

This writing course has helped me a lot. My experience from writing in high school and Writing 101 from Writing 102 was different but had some similarities, learning in this writing class and learning in my other classes had a little connection but was also different, and the power and privilege theme for this writing class was relatable to me and the world around me. I have learned a lot this semester in Writing. I have gotten better at writing but I still have some weaknesses to work on but later in my college years, I hope to not have a problem at all in writing a paper. I know I would become a better writer and will start to like writing once I know how to use my time wisely and make a commitment to complete a writing assignment/paper.

Multimodal Unit Reflection

This assignment was a little challenging because we had to make a game board out of one of the papers we wrote. I have never done anything like this which is the main reason why it was challenging. It was also challenging because I cannot draw but I am creative and 75% of the project/multimodal assignment had to be ours. The fact that we created a game board out of one of our papers was the unique thing about the assignment. Making the game pieces, instructions, and game cards came easy but drawing the game board was the hardest thing I had to do because no matter how hard I try drawing is my biggest struggle. I have done a multimodal assignment before. These two were similar because I had to take a paper I already wrote and change it up a bit. I think I did really well because I was creative despite the drawing of my game board which wasn’t so great. I did make time and made a commitment on this assignment because I knew I would struggle with drawing my game board. When we got to write out our ideas and everything in class is what helped me with this assignment because I got help from the professor and that also gave me more ideas or something I needed to change. I learned about this assignment that you can take a paper and change it in a creative way and make something good and different out of it.

04/25/17

The biggest challenge for completing my project is maybe drawing my game board because I am horrible at drawing and cannot draw at all. I will have to really be careful and take my time to draw my actual game board. I hope that it will come out right and everything will look good. I hope that the drawing the game board won’t be to hard.

Researched Argument Unit Reflection

This assignment was a little challenging because I have never done a paper with 7 sources. I really put time and effort into the paper. I didn’t get the grade I wanted, so I will revise it because I really tried. The next time I just have to try harder, but I know what needs to be fixed. I struggled with finding sources for the paper because I didn’t want one that was irrelevant to the paper. The thesis was also something I struggled with as well because I didn’t know how to sum everything up that the whole paper was about and put everything together. The things that came naturally were the claims/what that paragraph was going to be about that supports the thesis. The part of class that helped me with this paper but not really in class was the peer review on Blackboard even though only one person gave me feedback on my paper. I discovered about myself as a writer while working on this assignment is that I have to make sure everything flows together and that I should work on thesis statements. I really focused on making sure I meet each requirement and that I try my best and put time and effort into it. I now know what I have to keep working on to keep improving as a writer. The assignment was a little challenging and I didn’t expect the outcome but that just means that I have to try harder to improve and make myself a better writer.

04/20/17

Two potential games that I could use where the goal is to win the game is use the something like the board game Sorry for the researched argument essay where it is to get to the 3 people to the finish first if 4 people are playing. Another I could use is maybe the board game Monopoly for the synthesis essay where the goal is to have the most property or money and get to finish first. The essay I could use for the purpose is not to win or for only one person to win is also the researched argument to have the first person to answer the most questions correctly wins or the first person to answer the most questions correctly to get them to finish first wins and that is the end of the game.

04/18/17

I feel a little confident about the research paper. I put time and effort into it and I really think that I would have a good grade. I do need to finish making minor changes with my paper. I took what was said from peer review and making changes there because I feel like the feedback I got back was really good and that I will end with a final strong research paper.

CRQ 04/10

The call: “You would know he found parallels between the struggles of those leaders and the issues people of color still face.”

The response: There are still many problems people of color still face today. Some things are job opportunities, more likely to be behind bars or dead than whites, school, the black culture, and so much more. These are problems are not getting better only worse. People of color are less likely to get a job if their competitor is white even though they may be more qualified for the job. Schools are also a problem because it seems as if they are getting re-segregated which is horrible. Blacks are also more likely to be behind bars for a harsh crime than whites just because the color of their skin. They are more likely to be dead mostly for no reason just because they are African American. They could just be walking home from the store with snacks just like Trayvon Martin and they would get killed because of false accusations of the person for them having a weapon or being a threat to others. It is constantly happening today, and this is how it is related to the word around me. It is related to the music I listen to because some artist talk about what is going on in the world and how it is wrong and should be stopped. No person of color should be judged or still face problems because racism has been over for years and also because they are people too just like any other person in this world. Everyone is the same no matter what color they are.

The question: Why do you think people can not get over racism or a person’s race?

04/04/17

I haven’t started the paper yet. I do think my thesis isn’t strong or where I want it to be. I do need to find two more resources that relates to my thesis and my essay as a whole. Hopefully, the feedback from the annotated bib will tell me where I am at and how I need to move on from there. As of right now, I do not feel confident about this paper.

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