My thoughts about my analysis paper are that I feel like I am not doing so well. I feel like the paper isn’t good at all and that I have a lot of work to do. I experienced so far with this assignment that I tend to just summarize a lot instead of analyzing the Op-Doc and that I am not good at describing and coming up with descriptive words or synonyms for the essay so it’s like I am repeating myself a lot. I do feel confident with my thesis statement because I followed an example from class/notes. I’m struggling with repetition and synonyms. I also don’t do good with transitioning from paragraph to paragraph.

I plan to revise my conclusion, better transitioning to and from paragraphs, and synonyms.