I think that the peer review helped, so I hope that it will be better. I was struggling with my ideas. I didn’t know how to just put the ideas in the article without being too blunt. This is similar to the argument essay but different because the citations are different, an image is included, and the way it is set up and has to be written. I was struggling with this assignment, but I think I will do better because I now know what to fix and plus, I have more time.