The biggest challenge for completing my project is maybe drawing my game board because I am horrible at drawing and cannot draw at all. I will have to really be careful and take my time to draw my actual game board. I hope that it will come out right and everything will look good. I hope that the drawing the game board won’t be to hard.
Archives: Daily Writes
04/20/17
Two potential games that I could use where the goal is to win the game is use the something like the board game Sorry for the researched argument essay where it is to get to the 3 people to the finish first if 4 people are playing. Another I could use is maybe the board game Monopoly for the synthesis essay where the goal is to have the most property or money and get to finish first. The essay I could use for the purpose is not to win or for only one person to win is also the researched argument to have the first person to answer the most questions correctly wins or the first person to answer the most questions correctly to get them to finish first wins and that is the end of the game.
04/18/17
I feel a little confident about the research paper. I put time and effort into it and I really think that I would have a good grade. I do need to finish making minor changes with my paper. I took what was said from peer review and making changes there because I feel like the feedback I got back was really good and that I will end with a final strong research paper.
04/11/17
As a writer, I think my strengths are hooks and making connections. I want the most and need the most help with creating a strong and clear thesis, elaborating more on everything, and making my main points clear and making sure they connect with my thesis and stay on topic. Each assignment helps me become a better writer.
04/06/17
I haven’t started on the paper yet, but I feel like my introduction will be the best paragraph when I start.
04/04/17
I haven’t started the paper yet. I do think my thesis isn’t strong or where I want it to be. I do need to find two more resources that relates to my thesis and my essay as a whole. Hopefully, the feedback from the annotated bib will tell me where I am at and how I need to move on from there. As of right now, I do not feel confident about this paper.
How to start revision?
What are you looking for with revision?
03/28/17
- How can I get the most helpful resources while looking for research?
- What to search to get the most helpful sources?
03/21/17
Something that I watch that relates to this class is an video o Facebook about some white parents that adopted an African American girl. The man said that people judge them and look at them funny because of their black daughter. He then one day judges a man besides a white woman and he just watched him just in case he might tries something or may try to steal the other lady’s purse. He talks about how people judge them and he does the same thing. He then tells his black daughter and apologizes for it and explains that one day she might get judged because of the color of her skin or because she is with a white family and how she is to handle it.
03/07/17
The biggest challenge for me in completing the rough draft might be the introduction. I always struggle with my introductions. I also think another challenge will be the word count. I barely make the count for 1000 words and now it is 1200 words. Hopefully the peer review will help me and I will do better on completing the final draft.
03/02/17
My biggest concern about the synthesis paper is to be able to connect the two sources together well and just to have a well-written paper.