Giles

 

Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page Sandra L. Giles.  “Reflective Writing and the Revision Process: What Were You Thinking” Writing Spaces, Volume 1, 2010, 15. 
Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words

This article gives an explanation to us on how  reflective writing uses our thinking.  They may write about their invention, drafting, revision, and editing processes. They may self-assess or evaluate their writing, learning, and development as writers. These activities help cement learning. They also help writers gain more insight into and control over composing and revising processes by helping them gain critical distance and by providing a mechanism for them to do the re-thinking and re-seeing that effective revision requires. The article gives examples of student reflective writing, explains how they function in a student’s learning, and gives scholarly support for why these kinds of activities are effective.

Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author. “False Information” 

Now, I do appreciate when she says she doesn’t want to include any “false information.”  

Metacognitive Writing

How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?

 

This article connects to us because our final project will be on something that we have to think about and come up with.  
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion.  How can we use Metacognitive Writing?

 

RJ Melzer

 

Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page Dan Melzer. “Understanding Discourse Communities.” Writing Spaces, Volume 3, 2020, 17. 
Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words

This article focuses on  what a discourse community to give us a better understanding on why this is important. He tells us why different discourses are important. The article relates the concept of discourse community to a personal example from the author and an example of the academic discipline of history. The article looks in to the concept of discourse community, discussing both the benefits and constraints of communicating within discourse communities. The article concludes with writerly questions students can ask themselves as they enter new discourse communities in order to be more effective communicators.

Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author. documentary analysis genre
How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?

 

We are currently working on a paper about discourse communities, so this article related to me in that aspect.  
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion.  What is the importance of a Discourse Community?

 

Dirk

 

Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page Kerry Dirk. “Navigating Genres.” Writing. Spaces, Volume 1, Issue, 2010, 15. 
Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words  In the article Navigating Genres Dirk talks about how writing is the focus on one specific genre. He talks about how each genre differs from one another. He talks about how a genre helps us write on a specific and certain topic. He also talks about how important it is to understand context and put it together with the genre. 
Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author. Transferability 

Location may not be the first, second, and third most important qualities of writing, as it is for real estate, but location is surely among the situational elements that lead to expected genres and to adaptations of those genres in particular situations” (“Transferability” 218). 

How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?

 

This reading connects to my research because he talks about focusing in on one topic.  
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion. How do rules shape our writing?  

Dasbender Analysis

 

Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page Gita Dasbender. “Critical Thinking in College Writing: From the Personal to the Academic.” Readings on Writing, Volume 2, 2011, 16. 
Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words  This article defines ways for us to critically write in our first year of college writing. This article provides us with a process on how to write and how to become a better writer. It shows us how to read the article so that we can properly write on the subject. It shows us how to analyze and look for the main ideas. This article also gives us an idea on how to make our writing personal, and how to make our writing academic even if it is based off of a personal topic. 
Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author.  mindlessness 

“but I might learn something of mindlessness, something of the purity of living in the physical senses and the dignity of living without bias or motive”.

“stalk your callin”

How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?

 

This reading connects to our other articles in class in that it is focusing on how to properly read through and analyze in order to form a well written essay.  
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion.  What is the best way to make a personal essay become academic? 

Lessner excercise

Exerrcise 1:

For exercise number one we are to free write for ten minutes about anything that may come to mind. The first thing that came to my mind when I saw I could write about anything but would have to be for ten minutes was how I feel social media impacts us teenagers. In my opinion I feel that social media has both negative and positive effects to not only teens,  but to everyone who partakes in social media. A benefit that I feel personally impacted by is the simplicity of communication it provides, with social media, I am able to reach friends quickly and share what I am doing at any given time. I also think it is very cool to be able to stay in touch with people you used to be close with that have moved, or friends that are in college across the country. With social media I have been able to stay in touch with friends from across the country and my family. Another benefit is that it is an easy way to make friends before meeting them in person. For instance, I am from Arizona so coming to Ole Miss I did not know many people but with social media I was able to come in contact with people I did not know before the school year and make connections before even getting to the school . I now have some really good friends that I made on social media before even coming here. Now, Social media also has its negatives. Social media makes us believe in false realities, it shows us peoples lives and looks that are not necesarily accurate. Social media can bring down peoples body images and make them compare themselves to things that are not true. Lastly, a negative is that social media can be very unsafe and can lead to bad things unintentionally.

Letter to the reader

  • Tell the reader what you intend for the research essay to do for its readers.  For this research essay, my intention is to provide a deeper explanation on exactly what the Humane Society is, and the importance of it. I want my readers to understand that doing little things, taking near to no work can cause a great impact on a specific community. 
  • Describe its purpose(s) and the effect(s) you want it to have on the readers. Say who you think the readers are. I feel like my readers could vary from teens to college students and even to adults. My purpose is to make those people aware of how common it is that animals are in danger, and left with no home and food. The effect I want it to have on people is simply to be alert. I want these people to know there are indeed things they can do. 
  • Describe your process of working on the essay. First, I had to come up with a community that was important to me so that I had prior information to use when writing this essay. After I chose my community, I had to gain knowledge on the more specific parts of this community and get a feel for actual statistics. Once I felt I had gained the proper amount of knowledge, I was then able to go ahead and write my paper. 
  • What kind of planning did you do? I would say that the planning I really did was choosing a community I felt comfortable talking on. Once I had chosen my community, I then did my actual research. 
  • What steps did you go through, what changes did you make along the way, what decisions did you face, and how did you make the decisions? The changes I made along the way were what community I decided I was going to research. I had looked for numerous communities to research, yet not alot stood out to me, and I felt that since I was not passionate about them, my essay would not be strong.
  • How did comments from your peers, in peer workshop, help you? How did any class activities on style, editing, etc., help you? The comments from my peers were the most beneficial when it came to shaping my Final draft. I felt my rough draft was not my full potential, so seeing the helpful comments my peers gave to me pushed me to do better and fix things I hadn’t noticed needed work. 

 

Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page Driscoll. “Observations, Surveys, and Interviews.” Definitions and Overview, readings on writing. Volume 1, 2011, 23. 
Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words In Driscolls article, she discusses and gives tips on how to obtain information for a research project, in this article she gives beneficial tips to improve our research, and make it ethical. She states that it is extremely important to use primary sources in order to correctly write a research paper. She feels that a primary source will make ones paper more ethical. She really gave a narrowed description on how to conduct a proper research paper.  
Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author. primary research, survey, ethics, hypothesis, data collection.  
How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?

 

 I feel that this article related to prior articles in that we are talking about how to properly write an essay. Other essays have told us about good backbones on an essay, but this one told us how to write it while other articles have narrowed down more on something like credible sources. 
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion. What is the most important step on gathering research for an essay?  

 

Critical Thinking Reflection #1

  1. How did you decide what information was most important for the draft? It was quite easy to pick out what was and wasn’t important when forming this draft. There is not alot of information to obtain, yet the only thing you could do is go deeper in the criteria. 
  2. Why did you decide to “leave out” certain information? How did you make these rhetorical decisions? Like stated above, there was not THAT much information to it, so I tried to include everything I could do research on rather than leaving things out. 
  3. What were the steps for your research in this draft? I had to come up with what I wanted to research, how I was going to get information on it, get credible sources, and then proceed to gather the information. 
  4. What assumptions/biases did you bring to the research? How did you work to contextualize and check these assumptions/biases? The only assumptions that I made were that the Humane Society was able to provide the majority of their animals with homes, so in order to make sure this was a fact, I had to look on their website/ websites to make sure that what I was assuming was correct. 
  5. How did you work with facts, observations, and so on, in order to form an argument? I had to find credible sources that provided my information, and then provide examples on why I thought this was an important topic.
  6. What information are you still searching for to help your research? To help my research, I am still looking for more statistic information on the Humane Society. I want more information on not how many animals are rescued but how quickly and how well these animals are kept after being adopted, I would also like to know how well each Humane Society does compared to other locations. 

 

 

 

Warrington, Kovalyova, King Reading Journal

 

Title of Article + Proper MLA Citation for Works Cited page  Warrington, Kovalyova, and  King “Assessing Source Credibility for Crafting

a Well-Informed Argument.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing, Volume 3,

Summarize the article — include your reaction, thoughts, anything to help you remember its claims. 100 to 150 words This article was one that I found not only interesting, yet I found it to be helpful for what I need to know now, and in the future. To sum up this article, we were given tips and examples on how to know when a source is or is not credible. Throughout Writing classes, we are assigned quite often research projects, which then needs you to be able to find sources, which need to be credible. This article gave us online examples of websites to determine if they were credible or not. The Author used an animal shelter as an example, and walked us through how to determine the credibility. This article also gave me a more broad idea on why it is so important to make sure that your sources are credible. I think it is so important because if you are trying to inform someone on a topic and your research is not true, this could lead to upset readers. 
Define new terms and concepts by quoting or paraphrasing the original author. “Animals are not ours to experiment on, eat, wear, use for entertainment, or abuse in any other way.”
How does this reading connect to other articles from class and/or your own research?

 

This reading connects to our Writing class in general, it has always been important to be able to locate what is credible and what is not when forming an essay, and this provided a deeper understanding of determining what is and isnt credible. 
Based on the reading, craft one question to act as a springboard for class discussion. How do you know when a source is credible or not?

 

Monday January, 25 Johns reading

  • Blog Post, Post a 200+-word summary/analysis of Johns & make a list of 5 -10 discourse communities in which you are a member.

 

I found Johns reading to be quite interesting, personally. Johns reading gave a broad aspect on exactly what discourse communities are. It had become evident after this reading exactly what a discourse community was and what it is like to be on the inside of one. Something I found very interesting from this reading, was how she stated that you do not have to physically be a member of one of these communities to be counted as a member. She states that we can all partake in our different ways. It was very interesting to see what each of these communities practiced, and opened my eyes to things I would not think of on my own before reading this. It was also interesting to see how each of these communities varied, but also how they are similar to each other. The last thing that really stood out to me was how she stated that we are  born in to these communities without choice. It was interesting to see how some people decide to follow the communities they are born in to grasp knowledge, and how some simply choose to do the opposite. The communities I would say I am a member in would be religious, economic, academics, athletics, and humanities.