I actually felt really good about this write. My junior year of high school we only did in class writing, and I made some of my best work during that time. I was able to plan out what I wanted to say and I feel that I got that message across. In class writing does not scare me as much because it is not expected to be as long as a formal paper. I also am happy to know that it is not for an actual grade because that allowed me to not worry about how exactly I was writing and more about what I was writing. I am happy with my paper and hope to use parts of it for my formal paper!