It was hard to let someone else edit my paper because mine was so personal. Fortunately, she was super nice and gave me lots of good feedback. Since we were running out of time we did not get to talk about what exactly we wanted to add to our papers to make them multimodal, but I think I have a good idea. She gave me some ideas on which quotes to pull out and focus on. I plan on using those to be a starting point to look for images and videos. It was a little scary letting her read my paper, but it ended up being fine and working out in my favor.