Lol I can literally write a rhetorical analysis with an ease of some sort, but can’t use the right font for my header… that sums up about my whole life.
so sorry …….
Anywho, super happy with the grade and happy that you viewed the paper and column the same way I did. I worked really hard on this paper making sure the “commentary” part of claim -> evidence -> commentary was sound and so I am happy to see “strong commentary” written in multiple places.
I have really really loved writing these last two papers actually. I enjoyed this one a lot because of how much I enjoyed Friedman’s column.
As far as errors I haven’t seen much of a pattern. My sister did some major grammar editing for me on this paper though which helped me to eliminate my bad habit of having 51604854 line sentences.
Lastly, I am glad “[my] paper gives [you] hope in humanity.” <3 You give me hope in the education system; you’re the best and I have much love for you and really appreciate everything you do for me.