Category: Timed Writing

Timed Writing- Argumentative Sources 10/19/16

I was still trying to figure out what I wanted to write about

Timed Writing 10/5/16

Is Anne Frank Considered a Modern Day Syrian Girl?

Since the outbreak of the civil war in March 2011, an estimated 11 million Syrians have fled their homes in fear. Now, in the sixth year of war, 13.5 million refugees are in need of humanitarian assistance within the country. In Nicholas Kristof’s New York Times column “Anne Frank Today is a Syrian Girl”, Kristof states that the Syrian refugees today are being treated remarkably similar to the way the jews were treated during the Holocaust in the 1930’s and 40’s. Nicholas Kristof; Harvard graduate, Pulitzer Prize winner, and New York Times Op-Ed writer uses the many rhetorical strategies in order to justify to his audience how similar Americans treated european refugees during World War II and how Americans treat Syrian refugees now. Kristof uses multiple rhetorical devices to prove the need for Americans to acknowledge the severity of the Syrian crisis by comparing Syrian refugees to Holocaust victims. Nicholas Kristof comparing these two events is very effective because the audience understands the severity of the Holocaust when they may not fully understand how severe the Syrian crisis really is.

Nicholas Kristof uses many different rhetorical devices throughout this column. One of the main devices he uses is emotional appeal in order to engage his audience. Using emotions in writings hooks the readers and captivates their interest. Kristof connects a lot of emotions through pictures of Syrian refugees in need. The picture Kristof uses in “Anne Frank Today is a Syrian Girl” is a picture of Anne Frank as a child and a crying Syrian girl who is covered in dirt and blood from the airstrikes in Aleppo, Syria. Comparing these two little girls is how Kristof compares the European and Syrian refugees through emotion. Kristof also relates to emotions when he describes what is happening in Syria today in order to inform readers of how much the refugees are in need. Kristof says, “President Obama’s reluctance to do more to try to end the slaughter in Syria casts a shadow on his legacy…” (Kristof). Because the use of the word “slaughter” has such a negative connotation and visual image, it immensely affects the audience through emotion and truly gives them a descriptive image of the damage in Syria. 

 

Timed Writing 9/12 Intro

College is where many people find who they truly are or want to be. College is a time to figure out what you believe in and how you would like to live your life. In Ten Little Indians by Sherman Alexie, there are many protagonists who struggle with their identity. In “Search Engine” the main character, Corliss, struggles with her identity and who she is supposed to be. When she goes to college she finds that she loves to read poetry, even though her family does not approve. There are similar characters in The New York Times video “Dream Catchers: Four Students and the Dreams They are Chasing”, a journey of four adults who want to better themselves by going back to school. All of the stories from Ten Little Indians and The New York Times video are about individuals on a journey who are faced with overcoming obstacles they thought were impossible in order to find who they truly want to be. The obstacles we face in life are what make us who we are in the future and eventually make us stronger.