Tag: elaborate

Daily Write 9/12 Intro revision

I think it definitely helped me to rewrite my introduction paragraph because it made me think of the prompt in a different way. It made me think of different ways to say some things and elaborate more on what I had already written. Because I already knew what I needed to write about and got my thoughts together, it gave me room to put more examples from the texts and video and expand on what I had already written.