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Daily write 4/5/17 revising and adding more attributions for sources

A great example of this is when Turchik says “The male-dominated environment of the military has traditionally not been very inviting or prepared to handle the needs of women. The military is often viewed as an environment that promotes hypermasculinity and rigid sex roles.”

 

Revised:

Jessica Turchik, a professor at Stanford University, discusses how the male-dominated environment within the military is not very welcoming when handling the needs of women. “The military is often viewed as an environment that promotes hyper masculinity and rigid sex roles.”